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TASK · beginner · 1-2 hours
Rewrite 1 landing page hero
Headline, subheadline, and CTA that make visitors scroll instead of bounce
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Why it matters
The hero is read by 100 percent of visitors and decides the whole page fate. One good rewrite is a lifetime portfolio piece.
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Steps
- Pick 1 landing page with a weak headline
- Write the audience and their biggest objection
- Write 5 alternative headlines (max 8 words)
- Write a 1-2-sentence subheadline with proof or mechanism
- Write a specific CTA and 2 sentences of reasoning per choice
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Expected output
Before-after hero plus 5 headlines plus reasoning
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Checklist
- Headline max 8 words
- Concrete proof or mechanism
- Specific CTA
- Reasoning written per choice
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Evidence
Before-after document
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Self review
Would you scroll if this were your first visit?
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